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The Process: Two Part Killer by =VictorianGentleman:iconVictorianGentleman:



He knew where he was going.  He always knew.  This place was easy to navigate.  Most roadways had convenient labels and numbers.  No need to memorize endless lines of coordinates.  To him the ally was 19.50.

A cyclist passed him without notice as he walked.  He grinned to himself.  The guy never even looked. His disguise really was perfect.  It was working as promised.  He turned down 19.50. He could hear his destination already.  It was loud.

A bum greeted him with an open hand and the further down the ally he got the more colorful the homeless got.  By the time he reached the door they were full out dressed; dressed for a party, dressed for an event, dressed to be seen.  He could see through them all.

On the inside it was louder.  No one was talking, if they were they wouldn't have heard each other.  It was like watching television with the sound down and the radio up.  Most people just moved their bodies, slowly rotting corpses cavorting to ambient bastardized beats.  He moved.  He moved through the crowd and along the back wall until he found another door.  People in the doorway moved to let him pass.  He found himself in a stairwell.

These weren't people like were in the club.  These were sodomites, degenerates, and perverts.  Some of the people weren't people at all.  There was a goat for sure.  There was also himself.  He moved away from them, physically and mentally, up the stairs.

His coat dragged on the floor as he reached his destination, the third door.  The hall was dark, so dark he could see light coming under the door and around its edges.  He reached slowly for the door handle and anticipated.

He took a deep… breath.
©2008-2009 =VictorianGentleman
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Author's Comments

Another part of "The Process", a story that I have been mulling over since I was 16. Yes, har har, it has been a very long time in the making. Yes, I am old. I get it. Shut up.

This story was directly inspired by the album "The Process" by Skinny Puppy, but is not a literal interpretation of the lyrics. However, after researching the album and the inspiration for it, I found a frightening number of coincidental similarities between my ideas for the story and the "religion" the album was inspired by. To lean more about the album by Skinny Puppy and the inspiration behind it, I have provided links for your edification.

For the album: [link]

For the cult: [link]

This piece was inspired by misheard lyrics of Hardset Head. If this story seems disjointed and cryptic then you are experiencing it as I do. This story makes no bloody sense to me either and we are discovering it together. I hope that someday I will be able to lay them all out side by side and put the puzzle together in some sort of order or sense, but I fear that may never happen. This like blood in water and the more I try to clean the water by picking out the blood... the more the blood spreads out and taints more of the water.

SEE! This story makes me CRAZY!

For more of "The Process" (my story, not all the other stuff):
[link]

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:iconalice-dee:
Anything inspired by Skinny Puppy deserves to be read.
I would like to read more, I'm intrigued.
:iconvictoriangentleman:
Hopefully... someday... I will finish more of the story and find an artist to put it in graphic form. I've always envisioned this story as a comic. Thank you for the compliments.
:iconcyber-toxin:
I'd like to read the rest of it...

It's quite good, in my opinion.

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:butterfly::butterfly::butterfly::butterfly:
:iconvictoriangentleman:
Thank you very much. I will add writing more of this particular storyline to my list of things to do.... Oi, it's getting long.

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Well wishes,
Grey Malkin: The Victorian Gentleman
:iconcyber-toxin:
Oh, tell me about it. There's a story I've been meaning to write for...a month, maybe more? It doesn't even have much plotline yet. ^^;

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:butterfly::butterfly::butterfly::butterfly:
:iconsereda:
Curiouser and curiouser... :)
Compelling narrative that had me following eagerly behind your protagonist only to be left completely bemused and really none the wiser at the end.
This is one of the strangest and, taking the other part She unfolds, into account, one of the most unnerving things I've read in a long while. It's horrific but very beautiful. I find myself repelled and fascinated at the same time.

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You'll have to forgive the aging cynic....
:iconvictoriangentleman:
"It's horrific but very beautiful." I can't thank you enough for such a glowing compliment. Thank you.

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Well wishes,
Grey Malkin: The Victorian Gentleman

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